Friday Flashfic – Lesson Learned


100 words to tell a story based on an image…
Today’s inspiring photo is from Will Blog for Sex, courtesy of


When we met you told me to kneel,
and I thought nothing of it.
A new game, play bottom.
There’s a first time for everything.

When you slapped my hands from your hips
and commanded I come
without my touch or yours,
the game stopped.
My heart sank.
I worried, fretted I’d let you down,
despaired you’d find a younger Daddy.

My insecurity undermined us both,
you squatted, fingered your clit,
squirted down my length.
My load shot harder and faster than I thought possible.

Lesson learned, baby girl.
To trust a new Daddy,
he must worship you.


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7 comments to “Friday Flashfic – Lesson Learned”

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  1. Muffy Wilson - 6 Dec 2013 at 9:21 am Reply

    WOW, that was a scorcher, Fierce! Very sexy, indeed! Giddy-up, big doggie!! 🙂 xo

  2. Michaela Rhua - 6 Dec 2013 at 9:28 am Reply

    Very sexy flash. Love the idea of turning it into a poem x

  3. Naomi - 6 Dec 2013 at 10:01 am Reply

    Emotional feelings gathered in so few words. Well done

  4. Michelle - 6 Dec 2013 at 8:22 pm Reply

    wow, straight to the sexy parts. great job

  5. pablomichaels - 7 Dec 2013 at 6:56 am Reply

    Sizzling hot rendition. Your flash captured many torching images. Daddy is pleased.

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