Friday Flashfic – Lightning, Then Thunder

100 words to tell a story based on an image…

Today’s inspiring photo is from Will Blog for Sex.

 

 Lightning, Then Thunder

I loved
him over me,
his hands on me,
his lips tracing my face,
the naughty plans he whispered
in my ear.

I wanted to cream
from finally having him,
to touch,
to feel,
to fuck.
Finally, he was mine.
And to be fair,
he helped
get me there.

 

But when she
knelt between us
and slipped her tongue
along my slit,
everything he did
was an afterthought
to the swirling,
darting
bliss
teasing
my hole.

He was the lightning
foretelling the storm
she stirred in me,
an element in
the torrent of lust
she
left puddled
at our feet.

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5 comments to “Friday Flashfic – Lightning, Then Thunder”

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  1. Muffy Wilson - 21 Feb 2014 at 1:09 pm Reply

    WoW
    “He was the lightning
    foretelling the storm
    she stirred in me,
    an element in
    the torrent of lust”
    WoW, just WOW. Fabulously erotic.

  2. Julez S Morbius - 21 Feb 2014 at 3:37 pm Reply

    Hot flash excellently written

  3. Naomi - 22 Feb 2014 at 6:22 am Reply

    Absolutely wonderful. Your flasher stirred up a lot of emotion and your visuals were perfect. I really felt like I was looking on wanting more

  4. AuroraRose Andromeda - 23 Feb 2014 at 11:01 pm Reply

    Wow! Hot! I love the detail, my breath caught in my throat as I read this. Awesome flash! *fans face*

  5. S.J. Maylee - 27 Feb 2014 at 9:10 am Reply

    Beautifully written. I love the emotion that shows through your words. Very well done.

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